I think that what you posted made a bunch of sense.

However, what about this? suppose you were to create a killer title?
I am not suggesting your content is not solid,
but what if you added a title to maybe get folk's attention? I mean Gallery &#8211; Emmanuel De 
Great is a little vanilla. You should peek at Yahoo's front page and note how they write post headlines 
to get people to open the links. You might add a related video or a related picture or two to get readers excited about what you've 
got to say. Just my opinion, it could make your website a little livelier.